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I think that what you wrote was very reasonable. But, what about this? suppose you added a little content? I am not suggesting your information isn't good, but suppose you added something that grabbed a person's attention? I mean Home Haircut - Haircut Made Easy is kinda vanilla. You could peek at Yahoo's home page and see how they create article titles to grab viewers to open the links. You might add a video or a picture or two to grab readers interested about what you've got to say. Just my opinion, it might bring your website a little bit more interesting.